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I found a dimpled spider, fat and white,

Legs fly forth, beckon night

A creature of that from which it came,

All shudder to speak its name

Around two bags the spider sat,

Growing large, and growing fat

Up and down, the balloons fought,

Against the spider, not yet sought.



I found a dimpled spider, fat and white,

Many pincers with which to bite

A creature of that from which it came,

For its mother's sickness it is to blame

Around two bags the spider sat,

I can't remove it from where it's at

Up and down the balloons fought,

Poison has not yet the spider caught.



We prayed we could remove the spider, legs and all,

But it was big; it wasn't small

A blight across the nation, it could spread,

Leaving no one living, just the dead,

To poison the many, to kill the few,

Was all that was left that we could do

One will die, and one will not,

One will live, but one will rot.



We prayed we could remove the spider, legs and all,

So we poisoned it, and watched it fall

A blight across the nation, it could spread,

So we poisoned it; lopped off its head

To poison the many, to kill the few,

The chemo was a wrecking crew

One did die, and the other, not,

You can no longer see the cancerous spot.
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This was an assigned piece that was required to use traditional verse. It was designed to show how limiting such structure could be, and it fully accomplished this task. It was also required to be X words in length, but I can't remember how many anymore.

As length grows, traditional verse becomes exponentially more limiting.
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~RosieMarie12 May 23, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
the sudden interest in poetry you have, yes?
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~Halcyon1990 May 25, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
I suck at it, and have never improved.
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~RosieMarie12 May 25, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I dont like mine either, but I dont care to much what people think so I post it anyways (:
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~Halcyon1990 May 28, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
You're militantly uncaring. I like that. :P
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~RosieMarie12 May 29, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
militantly? Im to lazy to go to Dictionary.com
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~Halcyon1990 Jun 1, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Fightingly, warringly, etc.
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~RosieMarie12 Jun 4, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
oh..
ha (:
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~Halcyon1990 Mar 6, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Rainbow to symbolize rebirth and hope. I don't have any pictures of spiders.
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